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You're like the candy on Halloween,
Sensuously sweet,
But full of tricks

And the raindrops on a sunny day,
Showering sorrow,
But leaving traces of warm colors across the sky

The mismatched socks I love to wear,
Colorfully cute,
But slightly out of place

Or a red lush rose,
Beautifully blooming,
But dangerous to touch

Maybe a graceful white dove,
Patiently peaceful,
But never arriving in time

But most definitely bittersweet,
Perfectly pleasurable
With a heartbreaking aftertaste
I'm just a little frustrated with life right now and as i was aimlessly doing stuff on my computer today little segments of this started to pop into my head so i wrote them down and this was the result.

Just talking about a relationship that has the best and most amazing of times, and yet can be frustrating and heartbreaking. It's bittersweet, and even tho it pisses me off sometimes, i love it :heart:
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Inlinverst Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011  Student Filmographer
wow :) This is really beautiful!! The way it's written and really nice usage of rhetorical devices :) It's lovely :aww:
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Felzm Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it? Is this poem for a person or for a thing? But it is good anyway!
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alanat Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
its for a person, thanks :)
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Felzm Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see, I hope he (for sure isa boy, true? is being cool whit you, dear friend Alana, you are welcome :), Nice to see you again I was missing you :hug:
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alanat Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2010
It is a boy. He's very good to me. In fact a lot of time I think that I'm just very very very bad for him. I missed you too :)
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Felzm Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I knew it. Oh, you can not to be bad anyway, dear Alana Marie, I think. Great, thanks for that :)
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Mirai-Mika Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
woot another poem =D Sorry you're feeling down, hope you feel better soon.
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alanat Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
im getting better, life goes on. haha i feel like i have no more art, just poems D:
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